Talk:Free Outer Eugenia

NPOV: I'm pretty sure all of this article is written from an in-character perspective, with repeated claims that seem entirely in-character, and glossing over having none of the organisational advantages of more conventional governmental systems, but regardless I shan't dispute the practicality of this anarchist system - It manages to work according to the NSstats, therefore it works. but seriously...

"Any Free Outer Eugenian productive association is entitled to the right to direct and control its production and to dispose of the fruits of its labor as the workers see fit. This has made all attempts to impose the brutal slavery known in much of the world under the euphemism of 'free enterprise' on the people of Free Outer Eugenia utterly futile."

...Neutral Point of View? I do not think so...

What 'organizational advantages?' Free Outer Eugenia has a highly organized society. It does lack the unproductive hierarchy and destructive redundancy found in state socialist and capitalist societies. As far as constructive organization goes though, the Federation has as much as it needs. You might as well say that an article about Knootoss glosses over the fact that it has none of the advantages of having an anarchist system and is thus not properly NPOV. Silly. And not a very NPOV view of NPOV at all one might say.

Oh and please sign your comments. I like to know who I'm talking to (EDIT: and I don't like having to rummage through the edit history of an IP# to figure it out). IMHO that aspect of Wiki etiquette is at least as important as maintaining NPOV on a fictional nation in an entry where it's fictional nature is not acknowledged. I assume that this is what you mean by 'IC' If so, then we have some featured 'IC' articles on this wiki. Meh, at least someone is reading this thing.

Free Outer Eugenia 10:31, 16 April 2007 (GMT)

There! Changed cited section to:

"This has made all attempts to impose hierarchical and coercive economic systems on the people of Free Outer Eugenia utterly futile."

Is that better? That sentence was awkwardly worded anyway. Anything else you want me to change while I'm in a NPOV mood? ;)

Free Outer Eugenia 11:29, 16 April 2007 (GMT)

Got rid of some more POV. I think that's the last of it. Unless someone objects, I'll be removing the NPOV tag soon. Free Outer Eugenia 05:50, 17 April 2007 (GMT)