Talk:Kajal

Kajal FAC Vote (0/0/1)

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1. I think this is pretty good, and I'd be willing to support it. But, at least for me, the beginning under the TOC looks ugly: because the star map is so wide, there's a huge gap of white space under the geography section. If some text could go there, or it could be reworked slightly, I'd probably support this. ~Gruen2 07:52, 25 March 2006 (GMT)
2. Pretty much the same as Gruenberg. It needs some work on the graphical and layout side, and maybe some more paragraphs to go with the lists. Ceo \ rant \ rave 17:02, 25 March 2006 (GMT)

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This be a self-nomination, arrrrrr.

I've spent some considerable time working on this, attempting to make it all pretty and well laid out... And, addressing concerns from others about using the CIA Factbooks as a guide, it's not just a bulleted list. Kajal 03:48, 25 March 2006 (GMT)

Went through and removed the double
's... Also reformatted the small areas of statistics and moved the TOC into the custom infobox at the side, and resized the starmap! Kajal 22:50, 25 March 2006 (GMT)

As a reminder, you can vote for your article. ~Gruen2 07:52, 25 March 2006 (GMT)

I'm not a real fan of the large spaces between paragraphs. Ceo \ rant \ rave 17:02, 25 March 2006 (GMT)