Talk:Kedalfax
This article really needs to be made more encyclopedic. NSwiki is not a national tourism page. I'm not sure exactly what to do with any of the sections, though...? Ceoranta 18:58, 31 August 2006 (GMT)
Kedalfax Department of Defence
Here's an anonymous and stealth offer for another wiki article; call it "Kedalfaxian Department of Defence" (odd that you spell defence with a C despite locating in NYS, but I'm not complaining!), "Armed forces of Kedalfax," "Military of Kedalfax" or whatever you like. Tweak, gut, renovate, demolish or reject as you wish. I kept "airforce" (one word) as a proper noun, sometimes varied it with "air force" (two words) as a common noun since I figured with the English, Dutch, German and Spanish linguistic influences a compound word like "Luftwaffe" (German) or "Luchtmacht" (Dutch) might be intentional.
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Yes, my spelling style tends to wander around quite a bit. I think you may have looked more into my nation than I was aware of having written. And thank you for uncovering a few articles I wrote before I remade my nation. The whole thing was very well written, and I was actually considering making an armed forces page, but I wasn't sure how I wanted to organize it. Very good job. Thank you. --Ked|talk|fax 01:40, 7 January 2007 (GMT)
