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Revision as of 07:42, 11 October 2006
Alright, Who defaced the World Cup section of my article?
Second Note: Stop adding the Editor's Note. Such insult is pretty lame, especially after such a long time.
-- Actually, according to the archives, this is what happened in reality. Spaam 11:42, 11 October 2006 (GMT)
Tidying up
I've fixed the capitalisation, as well as several points of spelling and grammar, but this whole article is still a bit messy. There's a constant mix of IC and OOC elements. Also, this part is ambiguous:
- The nation also joined several groups in NS, including the Anti-Noob Coalition led by Slaglands and Automagfreek. Ziotah's biggest ally at the time was Foxweather. Sadly, Ziotah would have future conflicts with the former.
The article said "the Formal", which I've assumed meant "the former", and corrected accordingly. But from a grammatical standpoint it has little meaning. Does "the former" here mean the Slaglands? Presumably so, but the construction of this paragraph is rather clumsy. Aridd 11:35, 6 June 2006 (GMT)
