Talk:Bryn Shander

"Later, when the Concordat collapsed, New Haven and Bryn Shander salvaged what they could and formed the Hermes Alliance."

I feel this line to be completely biased in favour toward the user with the NationStates account of the same name as the nation page, and against the entity of the Concordat, and therefore contrary to the Neutral Point of View / NPOV guidelines. Therefore at 11:00, 6 September 2005 I edited the line to;

"Later, when the Concordat democratically ejected them both, New Haven and Bryn Shander formed the Hermes Alliance between themselves."

As I was of the sincere belief this was the process of events. How-ever, at 11:04, 6 September I edited it to:

"Later, when the Concordat democratically ejected Bryn Shander, New Haven left and followed Bryn Shander, and they both paired up to form the Hermes Alliance between themselves.", because of new data I had just been informed of and wished to keep the entry up-to-date and factually correct, while enforce NPOV for both parties without favour. However, at 14:40, 6 September 2005 the entry was reverted back to "Later, when the Concordat collapsed, New Haven and Bryn Shander salvaged what they could and formed the Hermes Alliance." by the user Nightbane with the line; (It's not democratic if not everyone gets to vote.) in the history page.

In response, I edited it to "Later, when the Concordat ejected Bryn Shander, New Haven left too, and both formed the Hermes Alliance." at 13:53, 7 September 2005. This was done again to enforce the NPOV guidelines, and present an unbiased, factual version of the purposely brief account of events. However, at 15:52, 7 September 2005 it was again reverted back to the line "Later, when the Concordat collapsed, New Haven and Bryn Shander salvaged what they could and formed the Hermes Alliance." by the user Nightbane. This time with no explaination.

In the interest of preventing some sort of "edit war" from developing while trying to resolve what I think is an NPOV breech, I am airing the situation for feed-back by the community and the user (Nightbane) in question.

• My edits were made under differnet IPs due to the dynamic nature of my IP.This United State 11:48, 8 September 2005 (GMT)