Difference between revisions of "Talk:Capitalism"

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Flaws or assets of each or either version? Which one is more suitable, more accurate, more neutral? Or should they be combined somehow? [[User:Aridd|Aridd]] 00:20, 15 March 2007 (GMT)
 
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::Flaws of the latter: misspelling of "individuals"...I prefer the first in general, as the second sentence of the last seems irrelevant, like it's attempting to imply that other systems do not. It also omits mention of the economy after the fourth word, and in my opinion capitalism focuses more on the economy than it does anything else. --[[User:Ember Nickel|Ember Nickel]] 22:23, 15 March 2007 (GMT)

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Let's try to avoid reverting each other's versions back and forth, hmm? I'd like to know what other NSwikipedians think. These are the two current versions:

The original version:

Capitalism is a socio-economic system or theory which emphasises private ownership of the means of production, unfettered freedom to pursue profit and the acquisition of wealth, and a free market economy.

or the version it's been replaced by (current version):

Capitalism is a socio-economic system or theory which emphasises the freedom of individuals to do as they please provided they are not directly harming other individuls. Capitalism recognises life, liberty and property as natural rights of all humans.

Flaws or assets of each or either version? Which one is more suitable, more accurate, more neutral? Or should they be combined somehow? Aridd 00:20, 15 March 2007 (GMT)

Flaws of the latter: misspelling of "individuals"...I prefer the first in general, as the second sentence of the last seems irrelevant, like it's attempting to imply that other systems do not. It also omits mention of the economy after the fourth word, and in my opinion capitalism focuses more on the economy than it does anything else. --Ember Nickel 22:23, 15 March 2007 (GMT)