Talk:Irashiru

Most of this article sounds like the plotline of a very bad film (no offence intended). This part especially. The fearless, self-sacrificing hero who defeats the "evil" communists? It's your nation, and hence up to you, but if I were you I'd rewrite it in part, and make it... I don't know, more interesting, more complex, less stereotypical. And more NPOV too (this article looks more like a piece of one-sided ideological propaganda than a neutral encyclopedia article).
Just some friendly advice. Thank you for contributing to NSwiki. Aridd 22:12, 21 June 2006 (GMT)

Response

Yeah, I have currently written that history as just a basis, although it is meant to be quite biased against Communism because a) This is based on my personal opinions b) I aimed to make their hatred towards Communism understandable as they were almost genocided completely by a large Communist dictatorship and c) This is a part of a history that myself and several others are making, it may end up as a proper novel but at the moment we are using our nationstates accounts as the basis for these wiki's and there is much fine tuning to be done.

I respect your comments and additions, and I will take them into consideration in future edits, as for the cheap movie and hero aspect, I admit that is what it looks like, and I was bored :P It will be fine tuned later. Also, with images of Mel Gibson in "Braveheart" it is hard not to make a matyr when describing a liberation battle :P