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| − | # | + | #As the article writer, I suppose this is to be expected... <.< [[User:Kajal|Kajal]] 22:55, 25 March 2006 (GMT) |
| + | #With the layout corrected, sections expanded and the TOC in the right place, I can only support this article. [[User:Jester|Jester]] 16:42, 17 December 2006 (GMT) | ||
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#I think this is pretty good, and I'd be willing to support it. But, at least for me, the beginning under the TOC looks ugly: because the star map is so wide, there's a huge gap of white space under the [[Kajal#Geography|geography section]]. If some text could go there, or it could be reworked slightly, I'd probably support this. [[User:Gruenberg2|<font color="green">~Gruen</font>]][[User_talk:Gruenberg2|<font color="red">2</font>]] 07:52, 25 March 2006 (GMT) | #I think this is pretty good, and I'd be willing to support it. But, at least for me, the beginning under the TOC looks ugly: because the star map is so wide, there's a huge gap of white space under the [[Kajal#Geography|geography section]]. If some text could go there, or it could be reworked slightly, I'd probably support this. [[User:Gruenberg2|<font color="green">~Gruen</font>]][[User_talk:Gruenberg2|<font color="red">2</font>]] 07:52, 25 March 2006 (GMT) | ||
| + | #Pretty much the same as Gruenberg. It needs some work on the graphical and layout side, and maybe some more paragraphs to go with the lists. '''''[[User:Ceorana|<font color="#000080">Ceo</font>]] \ [[User talk:Ceorana|<font color="#ff0000">rant</font>]] <font color=white>\</font> [[Special:Contributions/Ceorana|<font color=white>rave</font>]]''''' 17:02, 25 March 2006 (GMT) | ||
| + | #Content's quite solid. However, the image placement and, dare I say, article's ''feng shui'' is waaaaay out of whack. In my opinion it has the potential to develop into front page material. (( [[User:Pacitalia|<font color="navy">Paci</font>]][[User_talk:Pacitalia|<font color="green">'''talk'''</font>]][[User:Pacitalia|<font color="red">ia</font>]] )) <small>Time sent:</small> 05:03, 13 October 2006 (GMT) | ||
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This be a self-nomination, arrrrrr. | This be a self-nomination, arrrrrr. | ||
| − | I've spent some considerable time working on this, attempting to make it all pretty and well laid out... And, addressing concerns from others about using the CIA Factbooks as a guide, it's not just a bulleted list. | + | I've spent some considerable time working on this, attempting to make it all pretty and well laid out... And, addressing concerns from others about using the CIA Factbooks as a guide, it's not just a bulleted list. [[User:Kajal|Kajal]] 03:48, 25 March 2006 (GMT) |
| + | :Went through and removed the double <nowiki><br></nowiki>'s... Also reformatted the small areas of statistics and moved the TOC into the custom infobox at the side, and resized the starmap! [[User:Kajal|Kajal]] 22:53, 25 March 2006 (GMT) | ||
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:As a reminder, you can vote for your article. [[User:Gruenberg2|<font color="green">~Gruen</font>]][[User_talk:Gruenberg2|<font color="red">2</font>]] 07:52, 25 March 2006 (GMT) | :As a reminder, you can vote for your article. [[User:Gruenberg2|<font color="green">~Gruen</font>]][[User_talk:Gruenberg2|<font color="red">2</font>]] 07:52, 25 March 2006 (GMT) | ||
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| + | I'm not a real fan of the large spaces between paragraphs. '''''[[User:Ceorana|<font color="#000080">Ceo</font>]] \ [[User talk:Ceorana|<font color="#ff0000">rant</font>]] <font color=white>\</font> [[Special:Contributions/Ceorana|<font color=white>rave</font>]]''''' 17:02, 25 March 2006 (GMT) | ||
| + | :At leats on my screen, the massive gap under Geography remains. Were that fixed, I would probably support this. [[User:Gruenberg2|<font color="green">~Gruen</font>]][[User_talk:Gruenberg2|<font color="red">2</font>]] 05:12, 30 April 2006 (GMT) | ||
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| + | :After a bit of a rewrite, the gap is... mostly gone... though on a widescreen, the paragraphs themselves look a little short. It looks a little better on a 4:3 display in that respect... I think. [[User:Kajal|Kajal]] 00:57, 30 July 2006 (GMT) | ||
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| + | I'm not sure I like the TOC being in the Infobox. [[Special:Contributions/Gruenberg2|<font color="blue">~</font>]][[User:Gruenberg2|<font color="green">Gruen</font>]][[User talk:Gruenberg2|<font color="red">2alk</font>]] 10:35, 6 September 2006 (GMT) | ||
Latest revision as of 12:42, 17 December 2006
Kajal FAC Vote (2/0/3)
Please remember to sign your votes with 4 tildes ( ~~~~) and update the vote tally when you vote.
Support
- As the article writer, I suppose this is to be expected... <.< Kajal 22:55, 25 March 2006 (GMT)
- With the layout corrected, sections expanded and the TOC in the right place, I can only support this article. Jester 16:42, 17 December 2006 (GMT)
Oppose
Neutral
- I think this is pretty good, and I'd be willing to support it. But, at least for me, the beginning under the TOC looks ugly: because the star map is so wide, there's a huge gap of white space under the geography section. If some text could go there, or it could be reworked slightly, I'd probably support this. ~Gruen2 07:52, 25 March 2006 (GMT)
- Pretty much the same as Gruenberg. It needs some work on the graphical and layout side, and maybe some more paragraphs to go with the lists. Ceo \ rant \ rave 17:02, 25 March 2006 (GMT)
- Content's quite solid. However, the image placement and, dare I say, article's feng shui is waaaaay out of whack. In my opinion it has the potential to develop into front page material. (( Pacitalkia )) Time sent: 05:03, 13 October 2006 (GMT)
Comments/Questions
This be a self-nomination, arrrrrr.
I've spent some considerable time working on this, attempting to make it all pretty and well laid out... And, addressing concerns from others about using the CIA Factbooks as a guide, it's not just a bulleted list. Kajal 03:48, 25 March 2006 (GMT)
- Went through and removed the double <br>'s... Also reformatted the small areas of statistics and moved the TOC into the custom infobox at the side, and resized the starmap! Kajal 22:53, 25 March 2006 (GMT)
I'm not a real fan of the large spaces between paragraphs. Ceo \ rant \ rave 17:02, 25 March 2006 (GMT)
- At leats on my screen, the massive gap under Geography remains. Were that fixed, I would probably support this. ~Gruen2 05:12, 30 April 2006 (GMT)
- After a bit of a rewrite, the gap is... mostly gone... though on a widescreen, the paragraphs themselves look a little short. It looks a little better on a 4:3 display in that respect... I think. Kajal 00:57, 30 July 2006 (GMT)
I'm not sure I like the TOC being in the Infobox. ~Gruen2alk 10:35, 6 September 2006 (GMT)
