Talk:Asgarnieu

So, what do the people who look at this page think? I would appreciate all comments, and critisism, constructive or not. Thank you.

Asgarnieu FAC Vote (1/0/2)

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Support

1. Of course, I totally support myself. All comments are appreciated and all suggestions are taken to heart and considered. Thanks so much, guys and gals. Asgarnieu 01:20, 15 October 2006 (GMT)

Oppose

Neutral

1. You're in an odd place for an article - I suppose it's right to say you're "on the brink". On the one hand, if you add more content you'll just have to siphon most of the big sections off into separate articles to avoid hampering size regulations, but right now your content is insufficient to demand so many subcategories in your article. Work on the content, develop the sections more and add secondary items to supplement textual data. Good start. (( Pacitalkia )) Time sent: 05:05, 13 October 2006 (GMT) >> A bit better, but it's still just all text. Content's still in the okay range. I'm still neutral. (( Pacitalkia )) Time sent: 03:06, 26 October 2006 (GMT)

1. I agree. There's a lot of basic information, but I would recommend you fleshing some of it out and developing the rest in seperate articles. Also, the introductory paragraph is... ahem, questionable in terms of NPOV. Aridd 23:45, 14 October 2006 (GMT)
2. Would almost support it, but a few long sections is better then loads of short ones, so those should be extended, and, per Ariddia, the introduction may be POV. --swilatia 11:34, 17 October 2006 (GMT)

Comments/Questions

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1. 69.92.237.2 21:21, 28 September 2006 (GMT)

Fix

O.K., I fixed the introductory paragraph, and I do believe that I'll start on fixing a few sections. Thanks for the input, folks. Asgarnieu 21:08, 17 October 2006 (GMT)

More "Fix"

I fixed a few sub-sections to place them into one. Hopefully, that will fulfill the suggestions made. Thanks. Asgarnieu 02:21, 26 October 2006 (GMT)