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#Well-written, but needs more information to tie everything else together; it's a bit confusing. '''''[[User:Ceorana|<font color="#000080">Ceo</font>]] \ [[User talk:Ceorana|<font color="#ff0000">rant</font>]] <font color=white>\</font> [[Special:Contributions/Ceorana|<font color=white>rave</font>]]''''' 02:46, 3 May 2006 (GMT) | #Well-written, but needs more information to tie everything else together; it's a bit confusing. '''''[[User:Ceorana|<font color="#000080">Ceo</font>]] \ [[User talk:Ceorana|<font color="#ff0000">rant</font>]] <font color=white>\</font> [[Special:Contributions/Ceorana|<font color=white>rave</font>]]''''' 02:46, 3 May 2006 (GMT) | ||
#Agree with the above, though I think a better term would be "chaotic". Perhaps if the sections were rearranged so they moved more naturally from one to the next it would help. [[User:Kajal|Kajal]] 01:14, 30 July 2006 (GMT) | #Agree with the above, though I think a better term would be "chaotic". Perhaps if the sections were rearranged so they moved more naturally from one to the next it would help. [[User:Kajal|Kajal]] 01:14, 30 July 2006 (GMT) | ||
| + | #Solid start but it needs a fair bit of improvement in transitions from one subject to another, and a few of the sentences give me the feeling you're heading off on tangents (re: what Ceo said)... otherwise, not half bad. (( [[User:Pacitalia|<font color="navy">Paci</font>]][[User_talk:Pacitalia|<font color="green">'''talk'''</font>]][[User:Pacitalia|<font color="red">ia</font>]] )) <small>Time sent:</small> 05:13, 13 October 2006 (GMT) | ||
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*Why is the article named Fodmodmadtol but addressed in the lead section as "Fod" and its extended name? '''''[[User:Ceorana|<font color="#000080">Ceo</font>]] \ [[User talk:Ceorana|<font color="#ff0000">rant</font>]] <font color=white>\</font> [[Special:Contributions/Ceorana|<font color=white>rave</font>]]''''' 02:46, 3 May 2006 (GMT) | *Why is the article named Fodmodmadtol but addressed in the lead section as "Fod" and its extended name? '''''[[User:Ceorana|<font color="#000080">Ceo</font>]] \ [[User talk:Ceorana|<font color="#ff0000">rant</font>]] <font color=white>\</font> [[Special:Contributions/Ceorana|<font color=white>rave</font>]]''''' 02:46, 3 May 2006 (GMT) | ||
Revision as of 01:13, 13 October 2006
Fodmodmadtol FAC Vote (2/0/2)
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Support
- Self-nomination. I think it's nifty. :P Fodski 01:25, 3 May 2006 (GMT)
- It's good enough for me. Not perfect - where it's not disordered it's generic - but not enough to dissuade me from thinking it worthy of feature. ~Gruen2alk 10:23, 6 September 2006 (GMT)
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Neutral
- Well-written, but needs more information to tie everything else together; it's a bit confusing. Ceo \ rant \ rave 02:46, 3 May 2006 (GMT)
- Agree with the above, though I think a better term would be "chaotic". Perhaps if the sections were rearranged so they moved more naturally from one to the next it would help. Kajal 01:14, 30 July 2006 (GMT)
- Solid start but it needs a fair bit of improvement in transitions from one subject to another, and a few of the sentences give me the feeling you're heading off on tangents (re: what Ceo said)... otherwise, not half bad. (( Pacitalkia )) Time sent: 05:13, 13 October 2006 (GMT)
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