Talk:Jey

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Jey FAC Vote (1/1/5)

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Support

1. I believe this article should be nominated for it's sheer brilance in quality writting. I feel that it deserves it's place in NSWiki history. I support as nominator. Nice Cool People 19:05, 24 February 2006 (GMT)

1. Tentative support. I feel it's a good article, but has a few too many empty sections and first person references. Still deserves to be featured, though. –|–– Ceo \ rant 01:06, 25 February 2006 (GMT)

Oppose

1. Too many links to nonexistant or inclomplete pages (pages with blank sections), a little too messy, and no structure. Needs improvement if its to be featured. --swilatia 13:00, 5 March 2006 (GMT)

Neutral

1. Very good article, in my opinion, but still lacks structure, a large part being very irrelevent. If most of the Governement section is moved to a different article, then I will support nomination.Vuam and Isma 19:53, 24 February 2006 (GMT)
2. Dead links are noticeable, a bit too many first-person refs, and the lists at the end could be tidied up. Try alternating the placement of your imageholders, left, right, left, right, if that also helps. Good article, but just needs a bit more work. (( Pacitalkia )) Time sent: 01:37, 25 February 2006 (GMT)
3. I have no problems content wise (save a few NPOV adjustments) but I think it could do with tidying up. Gruen2alk 14:27, 7 March 2006 (GMT)
4. Changing my vote to neutral. After reading other comments and rereading the article, I find it to be a bit too first-person and a bit too self-promoting. Ceo \ rant \ rave 04:42, 14 March 2006 (GMT)
5. Lots of useful stuff and very pretty, but as previously stated: too many red links, particularly for 'expanded information'. Also is too much in the first-person 'we do this', 'we do that' etc. Otherwise great. - Star 14:44, 14 March 2006 (GMT)

Comments/Questions

• Personally, I like articles to start with text, not just TOC and Infobox. Perhaps a short paragraph summing up what Jey is could be moved above the TOC? Gruen2alk 14:27, 7 March 2006 (GMT)
  • That seems to have been done. Ceo \ rant \ rave 04:42, 14 March 2006 (GMT)
• It would be nice if the box at the top were somehow less obnoxious, and the green shades don't really help it either. In theory at least, nation pages are supposed to be about the nation, not the property of one user. Ceo \ rant \ rave 04:42, 14 March 2006 (GMT)
  • I concur. --Goobergunch|? 09:44, 17 March 2006 (GMT)